Core Narrative 5

TITLE (3 POINTS): elda the savior

CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT: the grandma of oscar jackson

SHORT STORY SYNOPSIS/logline THAT INCLUDES A CLEAR BEGINNING, MIDDLE AND END (10 POINTS)

Elda( the leader of the rose pedals  ) grew up in the start of the new world wars she saw the fall and the rise.

But she wasnt for the war. she was a God she was a breath of joy she ran operations to help those that could afford to leave the country do so when it all started. Before oscar came along she beat a case against the seats and she won. she is a hero in the flesh. Nearly dying in the 6th war she was washed up a river by a squad from the army’s 14th unit they were known for killing off cities after they used them for shelter. they were always running a outlawed leader(captin ross)  led the charge from state to state .elda lost ever one but her grandbaby oscar in the 7th war.

GENRE:

PROTAGONIST (5 POINTS)

Grandma elda

ANTAGONIST (5 POINTS)

The 14th unit

MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/ DESCRIPTIONS (5 POINTS): the rose pedals

PRIMARY LOCATIONS WITH DESCRIPTIONS (3 POINTS):

Atlanta, jamaica

ADDITIVE COMPREHENSION (10 POINTS):

Origin Story — Historical Event

Origin Story — Character

Origin Story — Organization

Character Reveal

Anticipated Showdown

Storyworld Reveal

Other Micro-Story Reveal

TARGET MARKET (5 POINTS):

The women.

THOROUGH DESCRIPTION OF THEIR MEDIA HABITS (5 POINTS):

They will have merch, and often use pop up shops to recruit new members

MEDIUM (REFER TO LIST AT THE END) (5 POINTS):

WHY IT WORKS IN THIS MEDIUM (5 POINTS):

When you find a way you make a way.

PLATFORM (REFER TO LIST AT THE END) (5 POINTS):

All platforms. radio/ podcast

WHY IT WORKS IN THIS PLATFORM (5 POINTS):

is how most people were able to hear the powerful words of the pedals because the work was underground not a lot of faces shown